Poetry #4 - April 21, Free Verse

Hello poets!

Please post your first poem in the comments below. 

1. Please read your poem outloud twice to make sure the words, line breaks and punctuation give it the rhythm and feel you want, before finalizing your post.
2. Please give specific comments back to five classmates

"Writing free verse is like playing tennis with the net down."                  
                                                     ~ Robert Frost


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